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This isn’t the way it was destined to be,
This isn’t the end that I wanted to see.
This isn’t the future that I had in mind,
You can’t be the feeling that I leave behind.

You were the one that could keep my heart beating,
You are the love that seems ever so fleeting.
He may not be one that I saw myself chasing,
But he’s not the one I consider replacing.

You may be the one that I’ll never regret,
But it seems he’s the one that I just can’t forget.
Now you’re the one who’s conveniently missing,
And I’ll not spend life in the dark, reminiscing.
©2004-2009 ~Majestical
:iconmajestical:

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This is a poem I am most proud of... after all, it's an actual poem after months of random verse writings... but I am proud because it took me only twenty minutes to accurately express what I've been trying to say for weeks now.

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:iconsherbanow:
very good i like this one.

i like the last line very much...

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“It is easy in the world to live after the world's opinions; it is easy in solitude to live after your own; but the great man is he who in the midst of the crowd keeps with perfect sweetness the independence of solitude”

Ralph Waldo Emerson
:iconmajestical:
thanks :)

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Nothing Worth Fighting For Is Ever Easy
:iconsherbanow:
np.....i will be checking out your other stuff over the next few days

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“It is easy in the world to live after the world's opinions; it is easy in solitude to live after your own; but the great man is he who in the midst of the crowd keeps with perfect sweetness the independence of solitude”

Ralph Waldo Emerson
:iconmajestical:
awesome.... and i shall do the same for you... of course

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Nothing Worth Fighting For Is Ever Easy
:iconsherbanow:
i like the ava...

i love the universality of music

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“It is easy in the world to live after the world's opinions; it is easy in solitude to live after your own; but the great man is he who in the midst of the crowd keeps with perfect sweetness the independence of solitude”

Ralph Waldo Emerson
:iconmajestical:
yeah.... its an awesome concept more people should pick up on

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Nothing Worth Fighting For Is Ever Easy
:iconsherbanow:
well they will in the future...cause they'll realize that it can kill depression.....thats why the whales sing!
and thats why they die when in captivity....cause they cant hear anything singing other than themselves.

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“It is easy in the world to live after the world's opinions; it is easy in solitude to live after your own; but the great man is he who in the midst of the crowd keeps with perfect sweetness the independence of solitude”

Ralph Waldo Emerson
:iconmajestical:
you know I'd never given that any thought before now... but that is a really interesting point... hmm... I must look into that

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Nothing Worth Fighting For Is Ever Easy
:iconsherbanow:
well i learned that from greenpeace....but Hermann Hesse (the writer) had placed the universal thoughts into my head before i read the book 'Greenpeace'

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“It is easy in the world to live after the world's opinions; it is easy in solitude to live after your own; but the great man is he who in the midst of the crowd keeps with perfect sweetness the independence of solitude”

Ralph Waldo Emerson
:iconmajestical:
hmm... i've never heard of that book before.... i'll look into it

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Nothing Worth Fighting For Is Ever Easy

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